How would you modify Straub’s advice to give better feedback in an online environment?

Reading Response Journal:“Responding—Really Responding—to Other Students’ Writing”For this reading response journal you have two options to choose from. Each option asks you to think about how you might go about responding to a peer’s text, so to support your work, make sure to include evidence/examples from Straub’s text, “Responding—Really Responding—to Other Students’ Writing.” Here’s your options:Option 1:Imagine yourself writing a tremendously important text—an application essay for a full ride scholarship, a statement of support for a child-custody claim, a legal defense, or a letter to a dying relative from whom you’ve been estranged—something important that you really want help with. In your first paragraph write about what kind of help you want from your friend. If a friend could read a draft, how would you want them to respond and talk with you about it? In a second paragraph imagine the situation were reversed and your friend had written this kind of text, what are some ways you could try to respond helpfully? (Wardle 228-229)Option 2:Straub’s piece was published in 2005, just as writing courses were beginning to use online platforms for peer review, but Straub doesn’t seem to be thinking beyond traditional paper-based essays in giving his advice on responding. In your first paragraph for this response, identify and explain five pieces of advice that Straub gives when responding to drafts. Now that you have experience giving feedback online through Canvas, in your second paragraph discuss how these pieces of advice need to be updated for peer review in electronic environments? How would you modify Straub’s advice to give better feedback in an online environment?