Discuss ways of Incoming Inequality.

Remember that an essay has a beginning, a middle, and an end. (In college, this does NOT necessarily mean 5 paragraphs; in fact, proficient writers are not confined by a paragraph limitation – perhaps in high school when you were learning to write organized essays it was appropriate, but it is no longer a rule). An essay must be more than 1 paragraph, but it could be 2 paragraphs, or 8, or 25. The rule of thumb is this: every paragraph should have ONE focus – message. And, the essay should have a beginning, a middle, and an end. Does yours? Revise yours so that your essay has a sense of an introduction, a body (however long that may be), and a conclusion.