Is your email logical/reasonable?

You are required to revise and rewrite ONE submission as an email based on the principles set out by Justin Bariso in his blog, “Steve Jobs Knew How to Write an Email. Here’s How he Did it.” should be approximately 250 words in length. This reflection should be revised and edit and turned into an email. Based on the followings: Purpose: Is your purpose for writing the email clear? Do you focus your content on the reasons why you are writing?. Audience: Is the language appropriate to the person you are writing to?. Genre: Have you demonstrated Justin Bariso’s best practices for effective email writing? Do you include the person’s name? A brief introduction? Do you use clear language? Is it direct? Is it emotionally intelligent? Do you use a sign off?. Edits and Revisions: Is your email free from spelling and grammatical errors? Have you significantly altered the original submission to address the needs of the new context, audience and purpose?. Persuasion: Have you established credibility? Is your email logical/reasonable? Do you use emotion appropriately? Here is what needs to be revised and edit:. The turtle Island story is viewed with a different perception among members of different communities. The most important aspect of the story is a turtle, an animal that represents people’s identity alongside the respect the people hold for the environment. The story of Turtle Island is viewed with different perceptions among individuals from different cultural backgrounds. Still, it is meant to emphasize the turtle’s symbolic nature, which represents life and earth. The tale reflects the world’s origin, whereby animals dived into the deep waters to collect the soil that created the world. The turtle is a symbol of the world that exists on the turtle’s back. Some indigenous people relate Turtle Island to the North America Continent. The story’s name is somehow historical and originates from indigenous oral histories that tell turtle stories that hold the world on their back. The turtle is a symbol of life, and the story speaks of a variety of cultural and spiritual aspects. They reflect the world as something that is held on the back of a turtle. Joseph Boyden is referenced as the legend in the story due to his ability to bring out a unique aspect of nature that identifies the world’s origin. His story has a unique theme, and its symbolic nature proves the exceptional literal skills that enabled him to produce such an outstanding piece of work. The story’s theme revolves around the origin of the world as it came about after animals’ efforts to fill the turtles back with sand. Identifying the world as something that survives in the back of a turtle is a symbol of the animal’s strength highlighted in the story. A turtle is regarded as a sacrdfped animal by most cultures.