Limiting Screen Time for Children: Beneficial, Detrimental, and the In-between

Thesis Statement: Clearly state main argument or purpose in the introduction to guide the reader. Rewrite thesis to reflect paper.

Structure: Reorganize paragraphs for a more logical flow of ideas. Ensure each paragraph directly supports the main argument.

Analysis: Provide a more in-depth analysis of the evidence to strengthen argument. Consistency: Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the essay.

Conclusion: Reinforce thesis in the conclusion and offer more insightful concluding thoughts. Sources: Only include already cited sources. Word count: 2000+