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Read the dr. Comments overall you will not need more than two pages. Only edit inside the word file I will attach don’t make a new file and highlight the changes in yellow The research is qualitative, deductive . But the conceptual framework is inductive. Below the conceptual framework the one’s below the variables make sure the paragraphs are equal without being biased to any Too make it clear in chapter two it’s written inductive research it’s not it’s deductive research just replace the sentence and write some words about deductive remove the citation and the reference from the table of references I will write below the explanation of his comments 1- remove imaginative 2- what you mean to expand strategies? What is exactly ? Just remove it ? Because we are not expanding we are going to increase the profit 3-separate the words kee th 4- yin model has nothing to do with increasing revenue the one highlighted in yellow is wrong yin never said that . Just quote Yin to what he really said whatever was wrote it’s wrong (case study research his book 5-profit margin is percentage ( just explain which one is addressed the profit value or profit margin. Apparently I’m seeking the profit value and differerentiate between both in this paragraph . 6- and this research will adapt … for example quantitive . This research is deductive . 7- measurement tool ” target=”_blank” title=”http://atlas.ti”>atlas.ti”>http://atlas.ti”>atlas.ti used 8- semi-structure is wrong word only use structured . Interviews mean deep learning – remove the blue via submitted to WhatsApp only . 9- 11 interviews 10- put a reference more than 10 interview 11- you are not developing a theory you are developing framework 12- remove in depth 13- 11 interview not 12 14- change the chart as he drawn it 15- write more words explain inventory monitoring more than one line and the other points as well ellabrotate more 15- for 150,000 as the director school just mention the roi you find the roi in appendix in which chapter the rate of interest and put it in the conclusion. Mention the direction mention there is saving for the schools and how much the 150,000 from the net profit 16- you cannot pick any variable and leave the others and write about each variable equally and don’t put them all in one paragraph each point separately You do not need to fulfill 825 words. Only edits please and slight changes. Because I’m not allowed to write more than 40 pages for my thesis excluding table of content abstract and table of content . So please only edit the dr. Comments