Why The British colonized India with the main purpose of converting Indians’ religion to Christianity.

Please edit my essay by adding 2 refutational paragraphs that goes againts another peer’s essay. My essay’s topic(Chance Hill): The British colonized India with the main purpose of converting Indians’ religion to Christianity.

My peer’s essay topic: The British colonized India with the main purpose of having access to India’s plentiful resources. My peer’s paper is attached called “History Final” and my paper is called “British Motivations in India Semester 1 Project”. My paper is the one that needs to be edited.

My updated paper must now include: A claim which directly addresses the opposing argument of your peer, while still bolstering your argument. So the claim needs to be edited as ” While Britain had an additional goal of claiming India’s resources, their primary task was to convert India’s religion” 2 refutational paragraphs, guidelines for which are attached to this document.

3 additional sources explored in the bibliography and 2 additional in text citations. (Evidence that works to bolster the counterclaim.) I already have 5 sources and 3 in text citations, so that should equal 8 sources in the bibliography and 5 in text citations.

An updated introduction and conclusion which are reflective of the increased scope of the paper. A final word count of 900 words. I already have 502 words so I need 400 more words.

Tips: 1. Conduct research to find opposing viewpoints.

2. Determine what counterargument you will address.

3. Accurately summarize that counterargument with reliable sources and concede to some degree.

4. Explain why the opposing argument does not defeat your thesis statement