Explain how you used the feedback to revise andimprove your message

PART 11. Develop Your Written Communication a) State your key message clearly i. Do not “bury the headline” — the main point should be presented directly ii. Your key message must be clear and concise b) Provide the necessary information and build credibility i. Provide an appropriate amount of background information for the audience, given the type of communication ii. Get to the point without unnecessary verbiage iii. Build your position as an expert or trusted colleague c) Support your key message with three or four supporting points/reasons i. Supporting points should be appropriate for the context and needs of the audience ii. Reasons should be compelling and relevant d) Employ either the Consult/Join or Tell/Sell techniques e) Clearly relay to the audience an actionable request2. Write Professionally a) Communication should be clear and concise b) Communication should build logically c) Sentences should flow smoothly, using appropriate transitions and varying sentence structure d) Employ appropriate formatting for ease of reading and clarity of message (headers, bullet points, etc.)3. Demonstrate Professional Presence a) Be authentic and genuine in your communication b) Use the appropriate tone and vocabulary for your audience c) Establish rapport to connect with your audience and grow the relationshipPART 24. Channel and Stylea) Explain why you chose the specific channel you used for thewritten communicationb) Explain what style you employed in your written communicationand why (Sell/Tell or Consult/Join)5. Use Feedback to Refine Your Communicationa) Describe or list the feedback you received on your writtencommunication from the week 5 Discussion Boardb) Explain how you used the feedback to revise andimprove your message