1. Make stronger argument points in relation to those theoretical framework.
2. Also, for the conclusions, make my points stronger. (i.e. China is not really wanting to become hegemony, but they are becoming a threat just because it’s economically growing.)
3. In order to prove China’s unwillingness, he wanted me to look over i) 1970’s detente ii) 1980’s GATT iii) 2001 WTO(When China joins WTO) and etc..